-Men kick friendship around like a football, but it doesn't seem to crack. Women treat it like glass and it goes to pieces-
Write children story books. sure can sell. And yeah, if u use our name don't forget to share the royalty.
YES ROYALTY and PLS let me edit your work because ones work is a reflection on ones self. As long as I remain the lioness.
ahahha... royalty?? ehehe... see how la ok... maybe i belanja you all mamak food... that's about it...and... i won't be using your names... but mainly on your characters..children books meh"?? how about some action , drama , thriller stuff???
i've got a working title...Perceptions and Lies....how's that??
Testing Testing Testicles!!!!It’s 3.47 am…and I’m all alone...My name is Liam Johannsen but it’s been 15 years since I last used that name. I’m known as Jason Hughes ever since I join this wretched ‘unit’. That’s all I can say for now. I’m still confused over what happened…. Still in the centre of the whole mess that I got stucked in… still is the one to be blamed …. It’s 3.49 am …. I’m still alone… I’m supposed to receive a package from an unknown ‘contact’ … and he’s 19 minutes late… I’m praying hard for him to make it … I desperately need the package to prove my innocence ….3.51 am…I’m on my sixth stick of Malboro now… My throat is dry from the heated smoke that I’ve been inhaling ever since I got here…… I hear a car approaching…My heart pounds hard …Damnit… I get an adrenaline rush at every vehicle that passes by here… I need to relax… I need another cigarette …I’m anxious …I’ve never been so desperate in my life… I need to know the truth… ahahha... lame or not??
erm...i feel like taking a hammer and going "what the hell is wrong with you!!!!" a bit draggy...hehehhehbut good start good startI agree about the writing children's book thingy. it seriously might work. but uhh..if you're more interested in drama and action, by all means go ahead. I don't think parents out there would appreciate an illustrated storybook about a kid who chops up worms for fun, lol.How about...the drama of living in a multicultural society? (omg, sooo patriotic)
There u have it...an unbiased, objective feedback.
yeah... ii know the problem already... i don't have a storyline yet... i was thinking as I write yesterday night... but i think i know what to write about already.... need a bloody strong story line and characters first...eheheh gimme a few months ok... then i let you guys see...
all these testing testing only... cause i've got time to waste nowadays... so i wanna do something constructive... maybe i'll try do a children book ar...
lam how come u so free nowadays?wat's changed in your life? hehehe
SEERIOUS ar?yes. lots of time to write a story.check this out for standards: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Plot_%28narrative%29write so that characters are people your readers can relate to.perceptions and lies can even be an erotic novel! hehehe.oh, try and read "the harmony silk factory" by tash aw. Dudes a malaysian living in the UK (story is about malaysia). quite well received.
ahaha... single mar now...ok.. i'll check out those stuff... thanks nick..
aiks? apa dah jadi?single?im damn out of the loop man. cerita sikit?
i've been single for like 3 months now dude... ahahhatakde apa nak diceritakan... tak ngam , break lor... wat to do...But i'm loving it ...
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